Our Pitch
Summary of the feedback from
our pitch
The feedback that we received suggests that our
thriller synopsis does meet the target audience that we set out for. We also
learned that people thought that our scenario is do-able. However one person
was uncertain about our scenario and how it would be carried out. From the
questionnaires, it seems that people enjoyed the enigma and suspense. Also,
they said that the narrative was very interesting and it engages the audience.
They also said that we should make it fast paced when we are walking through
the park and we should add more dialogue. The location of the synopsis was very
suitable. They also said they would watch the whole film. They said the props
were appropriate for the thriller genre. The ideas did fit the thriller genre.
Our old shot list
we had to compose a new shot list since we changed our idea.
Our old storyboards for the first edit
The new storyboards for our final edit
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